Monday, August 11, 2014

Blitz: Extraordinary Love by Micah Persell

When Of Eternal Life got accepted for publication, I had to cut over 20,000 words from it to get it down to the size Crimson Romance put out in their books.  Here’s one of the scenes that I would have loved to keep:
“Are you serious?  We’re just going to take a road trip mid-abduction?”
“I’m serious.  Mom and I traveled the 40 all of the time.  I’ve got plenty of…awesome…stops plotted up here,” Eli tapped his temple.  She did not look reassured as she pulled from the freeway and looked at him pointedly for the next direction to turn.
“Right at this corner.”  Eli hoped it was still here.  It’d been a while since he’d visited it at the age of…eleven? 
Abilene spotted the sign for it before he did.  She burst out in peels of delighted laughter.  “Please tell me we’re stopping at the Blarney Stone!”
His lips spread so widely into a smile that his cheeks hurt.  Wow, her laughter was something.  “Didn’t you know Texas and Ireland are like this?”  He held up a hand sporting the index and middle finger twined. 
“Yeah, I must have skipped that day in World Geography,” she rolled her eyes, but her face was flushed with excitement. 
The Blarney Stone, alas, had no real tourist parking, so Abilene pulled the truck over to the side of the road.  Both doors creaked as Eli and Abilene emerged from the cab into the sweltering heat of the South.
“Ugh!” Abilene exclaimed, immediately pulling her t-shirt away from the front of her body.  Eli chuckled, even as his own shirt began to cling to the sweat that had developed instantly upon stepping outside.  She tossed him a dirty look.  “This is gross,” she accused him, as though he were responsible for the weather in Texas.
“Yes, ma’am,” he nodded gravely.  She spun on the spot and stomped a few steps before looking about in confusion.  She turned on him again.
“Well, where is it?”  Nothing resembling a stone, of the Blarney or any other variety, could be seen near where they were standing.
Donning the most serious expression he could muster, Eli pointed tactfully toward a hideous, blanched-spinach-green cement pedestal.
Abilene’s mouth dropped open.  “That’s the Blarney Stone?” she asked incredulously.
“Of Shamrock, Texas, yes,” Eli replied easily. 
She shut her mouth and drew herself up to her whole height.  “Ah, well,” she looked at him and waggled her eyebrows, “it looks to be bursting with good ju-ju.”
“Indeed,” Eli raised one eyebrow, strode to her side, and offered her his arm.  “Shall we?”
She looked at him for a moment, then turned her eyes downward to gaze at his crooked arm.  She tentatively stretched out her hand, but then hesitated.  Eli suddenly found himself holding his breath, hoping, praying for her to keep moving her arm forward until her cool fingers touched his bare skin.
Her moment of hesitation was over nearly as soon as it began, and she threaded her hand through the gap between his elbow and rib cage to place her hand lightly on his forearm. 
Eli still found it impossible to breathe, but now for a different reason.  It was the first time she had initiated touch with him since he’d abducted her.  His skin was thrumming with energy; it spread out from the epicenter of her hand and rushed to every corner of his body, pooling in one place particularly.
He heard her breath hitch and was almost overwhelmed by the feelings of relief the sound caused.  It may be an innocent touch, but she was affected by it, too. 
 “Good girl,” he smiled his approval and tugged on her arm lightly.  “Now, come on,” he nodded toward the empty park.  “We want to get our good luck before everyone else wears it out.”
A sardonic chuckle breathed out between her lips, but she followed where he led until they were both staring down at the brightly colored Irish relic. 
In the center of the green cement block, a granite-colored stone lay embedded above a dirty plaque.
“Kiss the Blarney Stone for Eternal Good Luck,” Abilene read from the plaque.  She snorted.  “Not without a bucket of Purell.  Is that gum?” she asked, pointing to a suspicious dark blob on the corner of the stone.
“Yup,” Eli responded cheerfully. 
She suddenly moved closer to him, huddling into his side.  “Texan.  Five o’clock,” she stage whispered.  Eli’s head flew up.  If she was scared, someone dangerous must be—
A few yards in front of them—nowhere near “five o’clock”—a sweet little old lady was shuffling along.  She was wearing a blue dress that stopped mid-calf to show her thick support hose and rubber-soled, tan shoes.  A humongous bag was looped over her shoulder and cradled lovingly between her inner arm and hip.  Her right hand clutched one of those paper fans glued to a popsicle stick that sweet-little-old-lady churches stock in the pews next to the hymnals.  It was thrumming at an impressive speed as she worked to thwart the hot, Texas air.  Eli moved his gaze to her face and noticed her eyes.  They were hard and beady and focused disapprovingly on Abilene and him.  His mouth quirked.  He might have to reevaluate the “sweet” part of his initial assessment.
“That’s eleven o’clock, darlin’,” was Eli’s only comment.  This was going to be good.  He settled back on his heels and waited for the woman to get closer.

Extraordinary Love
Micah Persell (author touring), Kathleen Shaputis, Holley Trent, Andrea R. Cooper, Candace Sams, Spring Stevens, Bobbi Romans, Lisa White, Becky Flade, Danica Winters

Genre: Paranormal
Publisher: Crimson Romance
Date of Publication: August 4, 2014

ISBN: 1440583269
ISBN 13: 9781440583261

Book Bundle containing 10 full category-length novels

Book Description:

Everybody needs love — especially those sexy shapeshifters, gentlemen ghosts, misunderstood demons and witches, and intergalactic leaders. You’ll find all of these otherworldly heartthrobs -- and the strong, sexy women who make their perfect matches -- in this captivating collection of paranormal titles from Crimson Romance.

Titles include:

Of Eternal Life: Micah Persell
Her Ghost Wears Kilts: Kathleen Shaputis
A Demon in Waiting: Holley Trent
The Garnet Dagger: Andrea R. Cooper
The Peacekeeper’s Soul: Candace Sams
Embrace the Fire: Spring Stevens
Swamp Magic: Bobbi Romans
Discovery: Lisa White
Fated Souls: Becky Flade
The Nymph’s Labyrinth: Danica Winters

Available at Amazon

Chapter One Of Eternal Life by Micah Persell

Abilene Miller, sitting cross-legged on the floor, squinted at the rolls of gauze on the shelf in front of her through the fringe of her lashes. When the gauze blended into something resembling a snow-covered mountain, she sighed with satisfaction and leaned her head back against the wall behind her. The supply closet was the coolest place in the hospital, and with this little trick, she could almost fool herself into thinking she was not in the God-forsaken Mojave Desert.
“Southern California, you lying bitch,” she murmured as she took a vehement bite from her peanut butter and jelly sandwich.
Dreams of rolling ocean waves, vibrant night life, and Disneyland had quickly given way to the reality that was Needles, California: a small town of 4,000 outside of the Mojave National Preserve.
Of course, the two military recruiters who had come to her hometown of Aspen, Colorado, right after med school to convince her to come work in their “cutting edge” research facility had played up those very tourist attractions in a way that merited a court martial for perjury. If that was even a thing that could happen. She didn’t know. Military I am not, she thought in amusement as she set aside her sandwich for a baggie of Oreos.
She sighed again, this time in disgust. Top 5 percent of my class at Duke University Medical School, and I get duped. She hadn’t even begun her residency, and these guys had wanted her. Really, really wanted her. Enough to throw an obscene amount of money at her, making “no” an impossibility. And if she had thought it was suspicious that they wanted to hire her before she had even seen the facility, the pull of finally being on her own had overshadowed the oddity.
She snorted. “On her own” was proving to be an elusive concept. In fact, she felt as though every step she took was measured. She lived in a military dormitory with the four other women who worked in the labs. They all carpooled to work each morning, and the head of the hospital, Major Taylor, seemed to lurk around every corner, as aware of her movements as her overbearing parents.
Abilene knew she’d made a mistake in taking this job. She just so badly needed to prove herself. What was that old adage? If it sounds too good to be true, don’t effing move into a military compound?
“Abilene, you in here?”
She gave an unfeminine grunt in response and returned her attention to her Oreos. The door edged open, and Dahlia looked in.
“Oh, Abi, hon, are you fantasizing that the gauze is snow again?”
“Among other things,” Abilene replied.
Dahlia shut the door behind her and sank down to the floor beside Abilene, reaching over and snagging an Oreo from the baggie. She turned her warm caramel-colored eyes toward Abilene.
“Tough day?”
Abilene met her friend’s gaze. “Dahlia, how many patients have you seen today?”
Understanding lit in her friend’s eyes. Dahlia had been at the facility longer than Abilene. She had been recruited straight out of the University of Pennsylvania, also before her residency, and had been working here for nearly ten months. From their talks, Abilene knew it had been a long ten months.
“Abi, I haven’t seen any patients today. You know that.”
Abilene nodded. Both women had come to this hospital in part because they believed in the cause. According to the military recruitment team that had visited each of them, the government was conducting an experiment in which they planned to refurbish small, abandoned military buildings in rural areas. These facilities would be for the local population as well as for the processing of the armed forces’ medical tests. The facilities would employ civilian doctors, but they would be funded by the government and sanctioned by the military.
It was nice in theory; however, the largely Native American population in Needles viewed any help from the government with suspicion, understandably so, and avoided the new hospital as though they still used plague-ridden blankets — a reaction the government had to have expected, which lead Abilene to wonder what the real purpose of this facility was. It was hard to believe she and the other women were here just to run labs.
“What are we doing here?” Abilene pushed a hand through her short blonde curls in frustration. “Damn it, I want to see patients. I want to save lives. I want to do something.” Dahlia broke eye contact and looked at the floor.
Abilene blew out a breath. “Sorry.” She offered a smile. She’d gotten carried away again. “Jeez, I’m sorry, Dahlia. I know you’re frustrated, too.”
Dahlia gave Abilene’s knee a squeeze. “Hey,” she shrugged, “the government is paying us to run labs and make friends. What’s to complain about?” She rose to her feet in effortless grace, turning to offer Abilene a hand up. “Come on. Treat you to a Diet Coke from the vending machine?”
This was turning into a tradition among the women at the hospital. Whenever one of them had a meltdown, it always ended with Diet Coke, which, personally, Abilene loathed. The other women sucked it down like ambrosia.
“Oh baby, you know just what I like,” Abilene said in a breathy voice, grasping Dahlia’s proffered hand while shoving thoughts of her disappointing career aside. She rose to her feet, much less gracefully than Dahlia. “You and your weird Swan Lake moves suck, you know,” she grumbled.
Dahlia chuckled and glided out into the hall.
• • •
Awareness flooded his senses so quickly he choked on his gasp of air. For several moments all he could do was gulp as his body took over in its need for oxygen. His lungs burned. He could hear his ragged breaths echoing around him, bouncing around an empty cavern.
Where am I?
His instinct urged him to take in any details he could. He heard a measured beep. His frantic mind wouldn’t place it. In fact, he couldn’t seem to concentrate on anything but that hysterical pull of air. Panic crept into the edges of his consciousness, causing his heart rate to thump.
Where was he? What was happening? Why was he … afraid?
God, not fear.
His mind clamped down on him. Fear was dangerous.
Regulate breathing. Determine surroundings. He clenched his teeth behind closed lips. Slowly, steadily, he drew a measured breath through his nose. The debilitating fear in his chest abated. Again, an internal voice whispered.
He pulled another breath through flared nostrils, this time blowing it out between parted, parched lips. As the panic receded, he noticed the incessant beeping slowed. In an instant, he discerned the beeping: his own heart rate.
A medical facility.
I’m hurt? He took mental inventory of his body. The sudden awareness of his limbs brought an onrush of pain. His bones felt crushed, agony knifed through him, and he groaned in the back of his throat.
Pain. Familiar pain. He was not a stranger to this anguish. He eased his eyes open. An involuntary moan escaped his lips, and he squeezed his eyes shut against the bright lights.
“1457, subject is stirring. Shows signs of light-related visual pain.”
Intense, animal fear arose at the sound of the clinical voice above his head. At the alarming reference to a subject.
As in test subject? Ah, God …
He held his breath as he processed this new information, what the presence of that voice meant.
I’m not alone.
For some reason, instead of calming him, this revelation ratcheted the terror tighter, to the snapping point. The inner voice whispered urgently:
This man is dangerous.
A lock fell from a hidden cache of information in his brain. He recognized the voice that whispered to him. The Voice had been his constant companion since this nightmare had begun. Now, the Voice whispered the identity of the other person in the room: The Tormentor. The beep above his left shoulder sped up as panic rushed in again. The muscles in his arms and legs clamped down as his mind scrambled over fight-or flight.
This involuntary movement caused more pain to slice through him, and he just stopped another moan from rising out of his chest. He could not let himself make any sounds of distress. Another revelation from that hidden instinct: Hide your suffering. He loves it.
Oh, God. How did he know that? There was no doubt in his mind that he knew that from personal experience. This newest revelation solved his fight-or-flight dilemma: flight.
He moved his left arm infinitesimally to determine how much pain he would be dealing with when he fled. He became aware of the cold, cutting metal impeding further movement.
A new flare of panic. Oh, no. Not that. He moved his arm again and met the same immovable restraint. He tried to move his feet. He was shackled. The sharp edges of the metal binding his wrists and ankles bit into his skin, adding to the buffet of pain, but his terror would not allow him to cease his struggles.
His mind screamed at him, urging his body to do the impossible.
“1500, subject is showing usual onset of panic at regained consciousness. Thrashing has opened wounds at the sites where he is restrained.”
The last of his confusion melted away. He remembered. He remembered everything, and knew he was lost. There would be no escape, just as there had been no escape for the past eight years. He’d been through this before. The panicked awakening. The fierce pain swamping every corner of his existence. The dawning horror of remembered tortures.
When he forced his eyes open, ignoring the sting of the bright operating room lights, a familiar figure approached.
“Always such a fuss, hmm, Eli?” The Tormentor tsked. Eli recoiled. His name was not safe with that man. He never heard it without being reminded that he had no control over himself or his situation.
His struggles against the metal restraints now resulted in a rather satisfying cacophony, but still only caused blood to drip down his arms and pool beneath his feet. The Tormentor approached, eyeing the damage Eli had done to himself with a sadistic leer that turned Eli’s stomach.
“Blood is strength, you know.” The Tormentor shook his head in mock-sorrow. “What a pity that you seem to hold it in such low regard.”
A feral growl resonated in Eli’s chest, and he punched his head up from the stretcher to glare into the Tormentor’s eyes. “I’m going to kill you.
I’m going to make sure everyone knows what you’ve done here, and then,” he paused to ensure the Tormenter was looking at him, “I’m going to kill you.”
The Tormentor cocked an eyebrow and raised a recording device to chin level. “0817, subject is displaying the symptoms of aggression that have heretofore been associated with memory recollection. Has threatened death. Again.” He clicked off the recording device and slipped it into the pocket of his scrubs.
“‘What I’ve done here,’ hmm?” He leaned down until his face almost touched Eli’s. “What I’ve done here is what you signed up for, soldier.
Nothing more, nothing less.” He straightened with a sneer and turned toward the door.
One of the two guards on the other side of the see-through barrier keyed a code into the door, and the hiss of released pressure and a grinding of gears announced that the door was unlocked. The Tormentor paused with his hand on the handle and turned to announce over his
shoulder, “Number 140 begins in four hours. Perhaps you should use this time to gather your strength instead of waste it.” He twisted the handle and left the room.
Four hours.
In just four hours they were going to conduct their one hundred fortieth experiment.
Number 14: gunshot wound to the chest. The cold feel of steel pushed against his sternum. The force of the bullet driving his body into the unforgiving metal at his back. Gunpowder stinging his nostrils as his teeth chattered from the cold caused by his bleeding out.
Number 58: asphyxiation by smothering. Excruciating burning in his lungs. The flailing of his limbs as he fought the restraints in a need to knock the oppressive hand from his mouth and nose. Stars dotting his vision as his brain fought the lack of oxygen.
His heart rate sped up to match his ragged breathing. Number 100: dismemberment. He couldn’t stifle the moan that memory dredged up, hearing in his mind the buzz of the bone saw, feeling the heat of whirring metal on flesh. His Tormentor had informed him that they had wanted to make the one hundredth “special.”
He was panting like an animal now. Four hours. In four hours, they were going to kill him.
For the one hundred fortieth time.

About the Author:

Micah Persell, winner of the 2013 Virginia HOLT Award of Merit for her first novel Of Eternal Life, holds a bachelor's degree in English and a double master's degree in literature and English pedagogy. She is an avid reader of all types of literature, but has a soft spot for romance. She currently teaches high school English classes in Southern California. Her paranormal romance series, Operation: Middle of the Garden, and her "wild and wanton" editions of Austen's Emma and Persuasion are available now through Crimson Romance.

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